hanna lynn sweede.

[kaylathomas]

...hanna lynn sweede.*
*all great changes in life are followed by chaos. *

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...basics*

name hanna lynn sweede.
nickname daisy.
age 17
gender female.
grade senior.hometown miami flordia.
sexuality straight.
personification daisy buchanan.
status awakened.
face claim hannabeth.

...appearance*

hair color black.
eye color brown.
build very short and skinny.
height 5'4"
clothing style skinny jeans and converse.
distinctive traits she has a lisp.

...personal*

personality
AT LEAST THREE PARAGRAPHS
-- Caring: She cares about other people a lot. She doesn't like it when someone hurts her friends. She's not some crazy person that wants everyone happy, but she doesn't like it when her friends are down and she'll do anything to cheer them up.
Energetic: She is full of energy. She's always doing something, or she'll get bored quickly.
Opinionated/Honest: She will express her opinion no matter what. Ask her something and she'll tell you the answer straight-up.
Stubborn: She is very stubborn in getting her own way. Hanna will argue for a while just because she thinks she's right. She will eventually relent if she realizes she's wrong, but it does take a while.
Smart: She makes straight A's and they're usually quite high. She actually likes school, most of the time, and tries her best.
past
AT LEAST THREE PARAGRAPHS
-- Well her past was pretty horrible. Oh and did I mention. The parents that ran out on her are not even her real parents. She was adopted at the age of 2. Her real parents died. So she dosen't really remember them. But she wouldn't anyways since she can't remember anything before the age of 6.
When she was little she was in a car crash which changed her whole life. All the memories she had before the accident were all lost. She had some pretty bad head trauma which caused her to lose her memory. Now it still affects her. Most of the time people have to remind her about things, because she can never remember them.
Her parents ran off on her and her family when she was only 12. Good thing she had two older sibblings that took care of her. She started off at a job at the age of 15 to support her and her sisters. But she always refused to go to school. Considering every kid teased her for being so short. And being different. They would tease her because her parents ran out on her. So the only thing she would do was draw and paint she was always in the art room making art work. And OF COURSE she got made of for it. People would call her weird. She tried out for the volleyball team her freshman year. And the coach told her no. Because the girls on the team didn't like her even though she was really good. They told her no.
present
AT LEAST TWO PARAGRAPHS
-- She ended up in new york because she needed to get out of her house she was at back in texas. Her sisters were driving her crazy, so she decided to move up here for more options. Like a new job, better schooling where she wouldn't get made fun of every single day.
She dosen't really keep in touch with her family. Her sisters don't want her talking to them since she suposlly "ran out" on the them like their parents did. But she would like to catch up some day with them. But school in the new city is working out well for her. No one knows about her past or anything. So she's normal for once.
She lives with her aunt. Her aunt moved up here to try to get a job on Broadway and didn't make it. So now they live in a huge house directly in the middle of New York City.
But recently she has been hearing voices of a woman named Daisy in her head. And it's like she can't get rid of the voices. It's like they are telling her what she should do and what she shouldn't be doing.
family
PARENTS AND SIBLINGS
Mother.
Name: Hanna Lynn.
Age: 37.
Job: Unknown. (Walked out of her life.)

Father.
Name: John.
Age: 41.
Job: Unkown. (Walked out of her life.)

One sister.
Name: Elsie.
Age: 19.
Job: Works at Wet Seal.

Other sister.
Name: Aubrey.
Age: 22.
Job: Got fired.


likes AT LEAST FIVE
- the color purple.
- sitting out at night looking at the stars.
- cuddling. <33
- pudding.
- music.
dislikes AT LEAST FIVE
- drama.
- being cold.
- storms.
- chocolate.
- bugs.


...literature*
book title the great gatsby.
backstory A BRIEF SUMMARY OF YOUR CANON'S PART IN THE STORY. ONE-TWO PARAPGRAPH

She is Nick’s cousin and Gatsby’s love. As Daisy was extremely popular among the military officers stationed near her home, including Jay Gatsby. Gatsby lied about his background to Daisy, claiming to be from a wealthy family in order to convince her that he was worthy of her. Eventually, Gatsby won Daisy’s heart, and they made love before Gatsby left to fight in the war. Daisy promised to wait for Gatsby, but in 1919 she chose instead to marry Tom Buchanan, a young man from a solid, aristocratic family who could promise her a wealthy lifestyle and who had the support of her parents.

...roleplayer*

name kayla.
age17.gender female.
rp experience a little. :c
how you found ouac neopets. c;
rp sample AT LEAST THREE PARAGRAPHS

Hanna had been going to camp since she was a little girl. She loved going there. She made it to the cabin she stayed at every year and noticed Queenie had already unpacked her things. Hanna got excited. Queenie and her have been in the same cabin since they both started going to this camp. Hanna hurried around the room and unpacked her things and rushed off to the dining hall. Hanna was somewhat tall, she stood about 5'5 and was fairly skinny about 115 pounds with long black hair that was pulled back into a pony tail. She walked into the dining hall and noticed Queenie sitting by herself just looking around. Hanna rushed up to her and practicly jumped on her. "Queenie!" she screamed. "I missed you." she said wrapping her up in a hug.
Oliver on the other hand which is Hanna's brother was new to the camp. This was his first year here. He claims he's coming to protect Hanna to make sure no guys hit on her or anything like that. Oliver was pretty tall with tattoos on his arms and a pericing in his lip. He went out and did this without his parents permission. And got in a bunch of trouble. But Oliver had a care free attitude he didn't care if he was in trouble or not. Oliver had long brown hair that was to his shoulders and super skinny. Oliver opened up the door to his cabin and just threw his bag in the door he didn't even bother about unpacking and followed Hanna into the dining hall to make sure she was okay.
Hanna smiled. "I'm great, now that I'm here and I get to see you." she said with a huge smile. "I've missed you." she exclaimed. Hanna hated that the two lived so far away and barely talked other than seeing each other at camp. Queenie was someone Hanna could go to for anything. But she was so excited they would be together for a whole entire summer. Hanna looked over at the boy and gave him a smile. And took a hold of his hand and she couldn't help but blush. "I've heard so much about you to." she said biting her lip slightly.
Oliver looked at the boy that was talking to Hanna and gave him a look. This was excatly what he didn't want to happen. "I'm Oliver." he said looking at the boy up and down. "I'm Hanna's brother." he told the boy. Then looked over at Queenie and couldnt help but stare. She was extremely pretty. It was like he couldn't take his eyes off of her.
Hanna smiled. "Were going to have tons of fun." she said softly before sitting down next to Queenie at the table. She looked over at Queenie and smiled. "Hopefully we get good food tonight." she said looking around at all the other campers walking in and grabbing a seat next to their friends before all of the tables filled up.
Oliver looked at Hanna and gave her a look. "Why do you have to go around talking about me." he said giving Hanna a little shove joking around with her. He sat down across from her at the table and tried to stare at Queenie without being noticable. Oliver laughed, "So what has Hanna said about me?" he asked.

[BECKET]

Hey Kayla! Thank you so much for applying! I just want to start off by saying that I really like the direction you're heading in with this character! It's really unique how you took an Old Wealth character like Daisy and reimagined her as a struggling adolescent. I really like how much of a twist that adds. I just have a few suggestions for the app before I accept it:

• Just some nit-picky stuff first. The name at the top of the app is meant to be your original characters name, same with the name in the subject line. In this case it would be "Hannabeth" with her last name, instead of Daisy Buchanan which you put correctly under Personification.
  
• I'd be more than happy to handle the picture situation if you could hit me up with the links to the pictures you'd like to use. Everyone can understand some issues with codes. In this case I'd just need two pictures, one of a stereotypical image of Daisy Buchanan from the Great Gatsby, and one of a celebrity you've chosen to represent your original character who will act as the face claim. The name of this celebrity would then go in the "face claim" section. If you need help deciding, I suggest harassing Noa, because she's absolutely fantastic with finding perfect face claims.
  
• For the status section, this refers to whether or not your original character "knows" that she's the personification of Daisy Buchanan or not. While it is awesome if she is awakened already, I'd like to see a bit of explanation about that in the app in the past or present section. For more info on this, you can check out the FAQ here! :]
  
• Everything in the appearance section looks fine!
  
• For the personality, I like these traits and I feel like they definitely describe the independent woman that you're creating. They also definitely ring true with the spirit of Daisy, but I'd love to see the descriptions fleshed out a bit more.
  
• For the past, I think it would help the flow and understanding if you arranged it in chronological order. Right now I had a bit of trouble understanding if it was her adoptive parents that 'ran out on her' or otherwise. If you went from when she was a baby and in the car crash up until when she went to New York I would be much appreciative.
  
• Also for the history, I'd love it if you could flesh this out a bit more as well. If she hated being in school because she was teased, what DID she like doing? Was there anything that gave her a sense of security despite everything else being hectic? Did she had dreams of one day making it big somewhere else? I'd love to see a bit more into her character.
  
• I like the present as well, but this too could be lengthened. Is she staying with a friend? Is she struggling to support herself? Does she need to try and juggle between having a job and going to school? I'd love to read more.
  
• Finally, and this is a bit nitpicky, but I'd like a smidgen more in the backstory section. This is just so people who haven't necessarily read The Great Gatsby can get a grasp of the character that's being personified and identify how Hanna may or may not exemplify that.

Altogether, it's the great start to an app! I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with it! :]

[kaylathomas]

i'm going to try this again. c:

[TEAM OUAC]

This app is almost done! I really like the work you put into it after Becket’s message, and on behalf of myself and all the Gatsby plotters, I can’t wait until you can start roleplaying with her! I just have a few more tiny things and then you can get started
-I’m still a bit unclear on her past. From what I understand, she was adopted at the age of two by parents who already had two other kids (unless the two kids were her biological siblings and they were adopted together?), and the parents then abandoned them at age twelve? If you could just clarify why the adoptive parents “ran out” on their children, as well as why there wasn’t any governmental action taken or how she’s avoided it (parents often get arrested for child neglect, children living on their own are usually taken into foster care) that would be awesome!
-You mention that her head trauma causes her to forget things frequently, but you also mention that she gets straight As. I’d like to know a bit more about how her forgetfulness affects her performance in school. How does she manage to push past her mental struggles to still achieve straight As?
-This is a very small thing, but a one-room apartment in New York City will still often go for millions of dollars; being able to afford a ‘huge house’ is often unheardof. If the aunt she lives with didn’t get the job on Broadway, what work does she do that could get her enough money to be able to afford such an expensive lodging?

Just fix those things and you’re good to go!

[BECKET]

Sorry! This app has been up for longer than the allotted two week WIP period. If you still want the character, please repost the app in The Second Step.